Recrafting

In writing we have been talking about 're-crafting' our sentences to make them more interesting. We can do this by using powerful verbs, adjectives and adverbs.

Here are some sentences we changed together as a class.

The frog sat on a leaf.

The speckled green frog leaped carefully on a slippery leaf.

Sophie walked to the park.

Sophie strolled slowly down to the dangerous park.

The washing hung on the line.

The damp washing flung and swayed noisily in the fierce gale.